tirsdag den 7. september 2010

Heather Farm, part 6

See part 5

VIII. The Ending


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14 kommentarer:

Margot Kinberg sagde ...

Dorte - I liked this ending very much. You're right that that is exactly what a mother would likely do - protect her child. Thanks for this terrific story : ) : ).

Dorte H sagde ...

Margot: I am glad you liked it.

Clarissa Draper sagde ...

That's a great story, Dorte. I liked that the ghost had lied but for all the right reasons. You could make a sequel short to this one.

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Dorte H sagde ...

Clarissa: thanks. Ghosts are not my usual kind of thing, but I though a lying ghost could add a touch of humour.

....Petty Witter sagde ...

Perfect - what a great ending to a wonderfully emotional tale. many thanks Dorte, as always I loved your unique story.

Dorte H sagde ...

Tracy: I don´t know what to do because I have got far more than my share of compliments this week.

Kelly sagde ...

I thought this was wonderful!! The perfect ending.

And as far as you writing it in such a short time.... well, "if you've got it, you've got it"!!
:) (talent, that is)

Dorte H sagde ...

Kelly: now you must stop it or I won´t be able to sleep tonight!

Linda P sagde ...

Ahh! a perfect ending, Dorte. I enjoyed the humour very much, too.

Dorte H sagde ...

Linda: romance + ghosts without humour is definitely not my thing :D

cathryngrant sagde ...

Dorte, I also love that the ghost lied. What a great story, you really strung us along.

Dorte H sagde ...

Cathryn: I could hardly write a *serious* ghost story, but it seems that I am able to write about most subjects as long as I can add a touch of humour.

Beth F sagde ...

Perfect! I just caught up with the story. Wow. And in English. I'm so impressed.

Dorte H sagde ...

Beth: I am glad that you liked it. And somehow my style (styles) seem to go better with English readers and publishers.