mandag den 6. september 2010

Heather Farm, part 5

See part 4

VII.

This story is now for sale via Smashwords.

7 kommentarer:

....Petty Witter sagde ...

Just catching up with parts 3 to 5 - brilliant, what a wonderful story you weave, it just got better and better. Like peeling an onion, we came across one layer of intrigue after another.

Margot Kinberg sagde ...

Dorte - Oh, this keeps getting better and better! I just love the last sentence of this instalment...

Dorte H sagde ...

Tracy and Margot: oh, it is great that you like it; it just feels so daunting when readers expect so much.

Clarissa Draper sagde ...

After reading you short story, I think the internet would be a wonderful way to re-invent the serial novel or short. Just like Doyle, Dickens and Queen.

CD

Dorte H sagde ...

Clarissa: I think you have a good point there. The internet does open so many new opportunities for readers AND writers.

Kelly sagde ...

I agree with Clarissa. Dickens had already come to my mind with all the story he published in installements.

As for expectations... you've certainly met mine with each chapter of this story. I can hardly wait for the conclusion tomorrow!!

Dorte H sagde ...

Kelly: sometimes it is just easier to believe a story is good if you have toiled and sweated over it - this one took three hours in all.