tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post2313356005014330114..comments2023-10-10T10:00:06.367+01:00Comments on DJ´s krimiblog: Mushrooms and ToadstoolsDorte Hhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14535044092722418173noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-43417616000548936752009-11-17T17:11:39.609+00:002009-11-17T17:11:39.609+00:00Cathryn: yes, I agree that it is often a good way ...Cathryn: yes, I agree that it is often a good way of structuring a story. I am glad you like it!Dorte Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14535044092722418173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-71653140446290342982009-11-17T17:02:54.314+00:002009-11-17T17:02:54.314+00:00I love short fiction that ties opening and ending ...I love short fiction that ties opening and ending together, and your piece is a well-done example.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-63485609639428486082009-11-17T13:35:17.312+00:002009-11-17T13:35:17.312+00:00Petty: well, sometimes you have your idea in a fla...Petty: well, sometimes you have your idea in a flash - other weeks the inspiration just won´t come, and you are never satisfied with your work. <br /><br />I love the course far too much, meaning that I spend too much time on writing texts and giving feedback. It ends next week so hopefully I will get back to normal soon.Dorte Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14535044092722418173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-33652920251940390412009-11-17T12:42:08.915+00:002009-11-17T12:42:08.915+00:00Try to tie beginning and ending together - not as ...Try to tie beginning and ending together - not as easy as it sounds I bet. How are you enjoying your course?Felicity Grace Terryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17852843882007267665noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-80424036261001725822009-11-16T14:59:25.105+00:002009-11-16T14:59:25.105+00:00Margot: this is a writing course text (as you have...Margot: this is a writing course text (as you have probably guessed), and it was quite popular though it wasn´t all the participants who got it. But everybody liked Arnold :DDorte Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14535044092722418173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3725252734697392575.post-15116894842135563512009-11-16T14:14:07.554+00:002009-11-16T14:14:07.554+00:00Dorte - What a terrific ending! It's funny and...Dorte - What a terrific ending! It's funny and it fits beautifully with the rest of your story! I also commend your style in this one; it flows so easily and caught me up right away : ).Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com